Eleven scrutiny haiku


Did you ever use poetry to help you reflect on your scrutiny work? Either reading or writing? Well, here are eleven scrutiny haiku from me for you to try. Each has the same format - three lines of five, seven and five syllables.

#1

Scrutiny is this:

Both Devil’s advocate and

Guardian angel

#2

The horseshoe table

Reminds us about the nail

That lost the battle

#3

The executive

Raises their eyebrows to say

I am thinking now

#4

We have invited

The concerns of citizens

As our honoured guests

#5

Councillor Davies

Brings something new to discuss

A seed of concern

#6

Some firm assurance

Goes a long way in this game

Of good governance

#7

With constructive ear

I give you my attention

And build on your words

#8

This is my question

A response to a response

Born in the moment

#9

With preparation

The conversation we make

Will bake much better


#10

Independent minds

Escaping the gravity

Of corporate group think

#11

In six months or so

When you look back at today

What change might please you?


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